docs: streamline text for readabilty

readytotest · Feb 6, 2025 · 94a8709 · 94a8709
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             <br>
             I value thoughtful, independent work and produce high-quality results
             <br>
-            in environments where the pace is steady and sustainable. I do my best
+            in environments where the pace is steady and sustainable. I also enjoy
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-            work when things are manageable rather than chaotic. While I thrive on
+            focused, efficient, collaboration, like working closely with developers
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-            deep focus and independent tasks, I also enjoy focused, efficient,
-            <br>
-            collaboration, like working closely with developers on pair testing or
-            <br>
-            pair coding.
+            on pair testing or pair coding.
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             <br>
             I'm always ready to ask for help when I hit a roadblock and just as
@@ -70,9 +66,9 @@
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             I've worked in focus on meaningful collaboration, supporting each other
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-            to solve problems, and getting the work done well, rather than fixating
+            to solve problems, and getting the work done well, rather than just
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-            on deadlines or numbers.
+            fixating on deadlines or numbers.
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