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diff --git a/en/images/archery-glide-test.png b/en/images/archery-glide-test.png
diff --git a/en/meta.yml b/en/meta.yml
@@ -5,14 +5,15 @@ copyedit: false
 title: Archery
 description: Shoot arrows as close to the bullseye as you can.
 version: 4
-last_tested: 2019-04-18
+last_tested: 2025-01-02
 steps:
-- title: Introduction
+- title: What you will make
 - title: Aiming arrows
-- title: Shooting arrows
   completion:
   - engaged
+- title: Shooting arrows
+  completion:
   - internal
-- title: 'Challenge: Different scores'
+- title: Challenge
   challenge: true
-- title: What next?
+- title: What can you do now?
diff --git a/en/step_1.md b/en/step_1.md
@@ -1,14 +1,11 @@
---- no-print ---
-
-This is the **Scratch 3** version of the project. There is also a [Scratch 2 version of the project](https://projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects/archery-scratch2).
-
---- /no-print ---
+## What you will make
 
-## Introduction
+Create an archery game, in which you have to shoot arrows as close to the bullseye as you can.
 
-You are going to learn how to create an archery game, in which you have to shoot arrows as close to the bullseye as you can.
+--- print-only ---
+![A target with three coloured rings. A crosshair is towards the middle of the target and is reporting 200 points. ](images/archery-final.png)
+--- /print-only ---
 
-### What you will make
 
 --- no-print ---
 
@@ -20,56 +17,3 @@ Click on the green flag to start. Use the space bar to shoot an arrow
 </div>
 
 --- /no-print ---
-
---- print-only ---
-
-![complete project](images/archery-final.png)
-
---- /print-only ---
-
---- collapse ---
----
-title: What you will need
----
-
-### Hardware
-
-+ A computer capable of running Scratch
-
-### Software
-
-+ Scratch 3 (either [online](https://rpf.io/scratchon){:target="_blank"} or [offline](https://rpf.io/scratchoff){:target="_blank"})
-
-### Downloads
-
-The starter project can be found [here](https://rpf.io/p/en/archery-go){:target="_blank"}.
-
---- /collapse ---
-
---- collapse ---
----
-title: What you will learn
----
-
-+ Use animations 
-+ Use broadcasts
-+ Use random numbers
-
---- /collapse ---
-
---- collapse ---
----
-title: Additional information for educators
----
-
---- no-print ---
-
-If you need to print this project, please use the [printer-friendly version](https://projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects/archery/print){:target="_blank"}.
-
---- /no-print ---
-
-You can find the [completed project here](https://rpf.io/p/en/archery-get){:target="_blank"}.
-
---- /collapse ---
-
-
diff --git a/en/step_2.md b/en/step_2.md
@@ -1,30 +1,21 @@
 ## Aiming arrows
 
-Let's start by creating an arrow that moves around the screen.
+Start by creating an arrow that moves around the screen.
 
 --- task ---
 
-Open the Scratch starter project.
+Open the Scratch starter project [rpf.io/archeryon](https://rpf.io/archeryon){:target="_blank"}.
 
-**Online**: open the starter project at [rpf.io/archeryon](https://rpf.io/archeryon){:target="_blank"}.
-
-If you have a Scratch account you can make a copy by clicking **Remix**.
-
-**Offline**: open the [starter project](https://rpf.io/p/en/archery-go){:target="_blank"} in the offline editor.
-
-If you need to download and install the Scratch offline editor, you can find it at [rpf.io/scratchoff](https://rpf.io/scratchoff){:target="_blank"}.
+--- /task ---
 
 In the starter project, you should see a target backdrop and a cross hair sprite.
 
 ![starter projects](images/archery-starter.png)
 
---- /task ---
 
 --- task ---
 
-When your game starts, broadcast a message to shoot a new arrow.
-
-![target sprite](images/target-sprite.png)
+When your game starts, broadcast a message to create a new arrow.
 
 ```blocks3
 when green flag clicked
@@ -37,8 +28,6 @@ broadcast (new arrow v)
 
 Once this message has been received, set the arrow's position and size.
 
-![target sprite](images/target-sprite.png)
-
 ```blocks3
 when I receive [new arrow v]
 go to x: (-150) y: (-150)
@@ -49,7 +38,7 @@ set size to (400) %
 
 --- task ---
 
-Click the green flag to test your game. You should see your arrow get bigger and move to the bottom-left of the stage.
+Click the green flag to test your game. You should see your arrow move to the bottom-left of the stage and get bigger.
 
 ![larger target sprite in bottom left of stage](images/archery-start-test.png)
 
@@ -59,8 +48,6 @@ Click the green flag to test your game. You should see your arrow get bigger and
 
 Add code to your arrow so that it `glides`{:class="block3motion"} randomly around the stage `forever`{:class="block3control"}.
 
-![target sprite](images/target-sprite.png)
-
 ```blocks3
 when I receive [new arrow v]
 go to x: (-150) y: (-150)
@@ -76,6 +63,4 @@ end
 
 Test your game again, and you should see your arrow move randomly around the stage.
 
-![target in a different position](images/archery-glide-test.png)
-
 --- /task ---
diff --git a/en/step_3.md b/en/step_3.md
@@ -1,13 +1,11 @@
 ## Shooting arrows
 
-Let's code your arrow to shoot when the space bar is pressed.
+Code your arrow to shoot when the space bar is pressed.
 
 --- task ---
 
 Stop the other script (the one moving the arrow) when the space bar is pressed.
 
-![target sprite](images/target-sprite.png)
-
 ```blocks3
 when [space v] key pressed
 stop [other scripts in sprite v]
@@ -25,8 +23,6 @@ Test your project again. This time, your arrow should stop moving __when the spa
 
 Animate your arrow, so that it looks like it's moving towards the target.
 
-![target sprite](images/target-sprite.png)
-
 ```blocks3
 when [space v] key pressed
 stop [other scripts in sprite v]
@@ -39,17 +35,16 @@ end
 
 --- task ---
 
-Test your game again. This time, when you press the space bar you should see your arrow get smaller, as if it's moving towards the target.
+Test your game again. 
 
-![target with the cross hair on it](images/archery-animate-test.png)
+This time, when you press the space bar you should see your arrow get smaller, as if it's moving towards the target.
 
 --- /task ---
 
 --- task ---
 
 Once your arrow is at the target, you can tell the player how many points they have scored. For example, they could score 200 points for hitting the yellow.
 
-![target sprite](images/target-sprite.png)
 
 ```blocks3
 when [space v] key pressed
@@ -68,7 +63,6 @@ end
 
 You can also play a sound if they hit the yellow.
 
-![target sprite](images/target-sprite.png)
 
 ```blocks3
 when [space v] key pressed
@@ -88,7 +82,6 @@ end
 
 Finally, you need to broadcast the `new arrow`{:class="block3events"} message again to get a new arrow.
 
-![target sprite](images/target-sprite.png)
 
 ```blocks3
 when [space v] key pressed

diff --git a/en/step_4.md b/en/step_4.md
@@ -1,5 +1,9 @@
-## Challenge: Different scores
-Can you add code to your game, so that you get a different score for hitting different parts of the target?
+## Challenge
+
+--- task ---
+
+Add code to your game so that you get a different score for hitting different parts of the target.
 
 ![cross hair on the blue part of the target with the phrase 100 points](images/archery-challenge.png)
 
+--- /task ---
diff --git a/en/step_5.md b/en/step_5.md
@@ -1,8 +1,12 @@
-## What next?
+## What can you do now?
 
-Take a look at the [Sprint](https://projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects/sprint) Scratch project.
+Try our [Sprint](https://projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects/sprint) project where you will create your own sprint game, in which you have to use the left and right arrow keys to get to the finish line as quickly as you can.
 
-You are going to learn how to create your own sprint game, in which you have to use the left and right arrow keys to get to the finish line as quickly as you can.
+--- print-only ---
+
+![A mountain scene with a road and a finish line. Time and distance variables are displayed on the screen.](images/sprint-final.png)
+
+--- /print-only ---
 
 --- no-print ---
 
@@ -13,8 +17,5 @@ You are going to learn how to create your own sprint game, in which you have to
 
 --- /no-print ---
 
---- print-only ---
-
-![complete project](images/sprint-final.png)
+Or, why not try out another [Scratch](https://projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects?software%5B%5D=scratch) project?
 
---- /print-only ---