different motivation

EIPS/eip-7377.md

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 ## Motivation
 
-For as long as Ethereum has existed, so have complaints about the user experience of the platform.
+Smart contract wallets have long been touted as the solution to Ethereum's user experience woes. As early as 2015, there were proposals for allowing smart contracts to originate transactions in hopes that new users would flock to smart contract wallets to store their assets. So far, only a fraction of users have elected to do so.
 
-Ethereum was designed to be an abstract platform, limited only by the mind of the developers who deploy to it. Smart contract wallets were expected to placate unhappy users. Unfortunately, many years into this journey, the tension is still here.
+Today, account abstraction is still an important goal in Ethereum and there are many efforts attempting to realize it. We're getting closer to succeeding at this, but unfortunately the years of failure have caused many users to simply rely on EOA.
 
-The ecosystem looks different than it did when when the first smart contract wallets were written. Several application-level standards have mitigated some of the issues. There are large standardization efforts around smart contract wallets, and a big push to make them the default on layer two chains. Everything seems to be moving in the right direction.
+After a user as accumulated enough assets in an EOA, it is not tenable to migrate each individual asset to a new address. This is due both to the cost and to needing to manually sign and verify potentially hundreds of transactions.
 
-One significant problem that hasn't been resolved though is what to do about the EOA users of *today*. Manually migrating assets from an EOA is not a tenable path to converting Ethereum's user base to smart contract wallets. We must provide a mechanism, embedded in the protocol, to migrate. This EIP proposes such mechanism.
+This is an overlooked piece of the problem. Converting *existing* users to smart contract wallets efficiently, will expedite adoption and push forward better support and integrations for smart contract wallets. They will no longer be dismissed as a niche use case.
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+Therefore, we must provide a mechanism, embedded in the protocol, to migrate EOAs to smart contracts. This EIP proposes such mechanism.
 
 ## Specification