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Fixes several typos in story passages
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brisberg committed Jan 25, 2021
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Expand Up @@ -15,10 +15,10 @@ Before your crew is finished, a large wave washes a crate of coal overboard.

:: Storm
<<set $crew -= 1>>\
A violent sea squal approaches rapidly from the north. Your crew rush to stow the sails and take the heavy \
A violent sea squall approaches rapidly from the north. Your crew rush to stow the sails and take the heavy \
supplies below deck to ride it out. Rain drenches your face as you try to keep the ship on course.

Above there is a brillient flash of lightning, followed imediatly by a deafening thunderclap. A crewmen on \
Above there is a brilliant flash of lightning, followed immediately by a deafening thunderclap. A crewmen on \
the rigging loses his footing on the rain slick beams and falls overboard.

"Man Overboard!" shouts the foreman, as several men try to throw him a line. However, he is quickly swept \
Expand All @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ under by the rolling waves and disappears from sight.

:: Old Shipwreck
<<set $fuel += 4>>\
The Barrelman in the crows nest yells that he spotted a small vessle beached on a sandbar off the starboard side. \
The Barrelman in the crows nest yells that he spotted a small vessel beached on a sandbar off the starboard side. \
You bring your ship around and send out a small rowboat to investigate.

Your men return saying the ship is abandoned and likely been there for several years. However, they recovered \
Expand All @@ -39,8 +39,8 @@ several crates of fuel in water-tight barrels so you count your blessing.
The Barrelman in the crows nest yells that he spotted a small raft on the horizon just ahead. As your ship approach \
the raft you can make out the body of a man lying motionless across the bamboo raft.

Your crew hoists the man up, and to your surprise he appears to be alive! Baddly sunburned and dehydrated he \
can barely thank you before falling unconcious again.
Your crew hoists the man up, and to your surprise he appears to be alive! Badly sunburned and dehydrated he \
can barely thank you before falling unconscious again.

You send him below decks to recover. A few days and warm meals later his vigor had returned and he pledges \
service to you for saving his life.
Expand All @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ service to you for saving his life.

Your crew rejoices as you approach a small port town on this remote island. The port is friendly to the empire and \
your ship is welcomed to the docks. While your crew enjoys some much needed shore-leave, you set about requesting \
repairs and resupplies for your vessal.
repairs and resupplies for your vessel.

The workmen work quickly to patch any holes and repair the rigging. Fresh barrels of fuel are brought aboard. Even \
a few young sailors looking for passage off the island signup to swell your ranks.
a few young sailors looking for passage off the island signed on to swell your ranks.
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:: Launch
Flags fly high, husbands and wives wave from the pier, and bells ring as your vessle, H.M.S Titus, \
Flags fly high, husbands and wives wave from the pier, and bells ring as your vessel, H.M.S Titus, \
leaves Port Royal on its maiden voyage.

Your ship is in tip-top shape and the crew is filled with joy and vigor.
Expand Down Expand Up @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ splintered boards dot the lower decks and you have been taking on water for some

Finally the strain is too much and the aft section buckles, pulling the mast down with it.

"Abbandon ship!" you shout, though it may be too late. Your crew scrambles to lower the \
"Abandon ship!" you shout, though it may be too late. Your crew scrambles to lower the \
dingy and cram aboard. Some leaping to the water to swim for it.

However, they say a Captain must go down with his ship. You remain aboard, sipping wine \
Expand Down Expand Up @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ enthusiasm, thanking you for your bravery and service to the Empire.

Porters begin to unload your ship of it's precious supplies and cargo.

You are treated to a find dinner in your honor by the Govenor of the island.
You are treated to a find dinner in your honor by the Governor of the island.

You and your crew enjoy yourself for a time, but soon you feel the sea calling to you again.

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