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 I introduced the family to [EveryPlate](https://www.everyplate.com/) which is a meal delivery service that provides recipes and the ingredients needed to make them. It was meant to be healtheir than eating out at restaurants but less of the effort required to plan and make meals from scratch. 
 
-Vicia received her drivers permit which opened the path to her eventually getting her drivers license like her brothers.
+Vicia received her drivers permit which opened the path to her eventually getting her driver's license like her brothers.
 
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 ## Summary
 
-For the second year, Vicia and I did "Guys and Gals" for Strutters. This is where members of the team do a sequence of dances with the men in their life. This year's theme was "Disco", and I had a great time dressing up and doing the dances with Vicia! 
+For the second year in a row, Vicia and I did "Guys and Gals" for Strutters. This is where members of the team do a sequence of dances with the men in their life. This year's theme was "Disco", and I had a great time dressing up and doing the dances with Vicia! 
 
 Soon after "Guys and Gals", the Strutters were off to New York City. I went to be a bit of an insurance policy since this was the first time Vicia was that far away without us. However, everything went well, and the girls had a great time! I think Vicia's experience with us in New York earlier in the year made it easier for her to be in the city with her dance team. Also, my sister kindly came to one of the events to spend time with Vicia and myself.