-intro section copy edits and adjustments

_includes/page-intro.html

@@ -40,6 +40,9 @@ <h2 class="intro-title no-scroll">{{ page.headline | markdownify  | remove: '<p>
                 <!--{% if page.subheadline3 %}-->
                 <p class="large">{{ page.subheadline3 | default: page.subheadline | default: site.subheadline | markdownify | strip_html }}</p>
                 <!--{% endif %}-->  
+                <!--{% if page.subheadline4 %}-->
+                <p class="large">{{ page.subheadline4 | default: page.subheadline | default: site.subheadline | markdownify | strip_html }}</p>
+                <!--{% endif %}-->  
             </div>
           </div> 
           <!--</div>-->

_layouts/home.html

@@ -16,14 +16,6 @@
           social networks serve people, not platforms. To redefine scale as a collaboration that benefits all, instead of a race in which 
           one winner takes all. It's time to take back the public square.
         </p>
-        <!--<p>
-          For too long, apps have taken one approach to 100 million users they took control of our social networks. 
-          This was the hook that kept us coming, even as they surveilled us. Used our data and creativity to drive their revenue.
-        </p>
-        <p>
-          Charged high tolls for connecting us to gig work, rides, and deliveries. And the few companies behind these apps use their 
-          power to make the calls that shape our lives. It can feel like we have no way out.
-        </p>-->
       </div>
     </div>
   </div>

_layouts/how.html

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ <h3>Frequency delivers a new pricing model for building predictable, sustainable
             tap into new Web3 features and revenue streams.
         </p>
         <div style="height:20vh; width:100%; border:1px solid #222; margin:0 0 3rem;"></div>
-        <h4>Changing the way transactions are priced unlocks a new class of use cases</h4>
+        <h4>Frequency unlocks an entirely new class of use cases.</h4>
         <p>
             Frequency makes it possible for builders to lock in replenishing capacity instead of managing often high 
             and volatile transaction expenses. This delivers an essential foundation for new business models, and unlocks 
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ <h3>Frequency builds on years of development in decentralized social</h3>
             <p>
                 We believe that a public social graph completely disconnected from financial incentives is the first essential piece 
                 of infrastructure required to unlock the true potential of social networks. The Decentralized Social Networking Protocol 
-                (DSNP)—in development for nearly three years and with a completed end-to-end proof of concept—makes this possible.
+                (DSNP), in development for nearly three years and with a completed end-to-end proof of concept—makes this possible.
             </p>
             <p>
                 DSNP facilitates a secure, open source, universally accessible social graph that is not linked to any financial incentives 
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ <h3>“Web 3.0 needs a universally accessible social graph to be successful.
                 DSNP presents a clear path toward providing this crucial service.”</h3>
             <p class="byline">
                 -Dr. Gavin Wood<br>
-                Co-founder of Etherium and Creator of Polkadot
+                Co-founder of Ethereum and Creator of Polkadot
             </p>
           </div>
         </div>
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ <h3>“Web 3.0 needs a universally accessible social graph to be successful.
         <h3>Polkadot uniquely supports this breakthrough</h3>
         <p>
           Polkadot's shared consensus model opens DSNP to scaled growth. As the first production-grade implementation of DSNP, Frequency leverages Polkadot's 
-          “relay chain” to deliver block validation at a fixed price. Future improvements in Frequency will continue to lower cost in the future.
+          relay chain to deliver block validation at a fixed price. Future improvements in Frequency will continue to lower cost in the future.
         </p>
         <ul>
           <li><a class="btn charcoal" href="https://forums.projectliberty.io/t/update-on-chain-selection/133" target="_blank">Chain selection process</a></li>

_sass/basically-basic/_intro.scss

@@ -91,7 +91,10 @@
   .sub-hero-wrapper .subheading-text {
     padding:15vw 0;
     .intro-title {padding:0 10vw;}
-    p {padding:0 10vw;} 
+    p {padding:0 15vw;}
+    @media screen and (max-width:$small) {
+      p {padding:0 5vw;}
+    } 
   }
 }
 .layout--how {
@@ -102,7 +105,7 @@
   }  
 }
 .layout--about {
-  #fixedTitle {padding:0 10vw; top:22vw;}
+  #fixedTitle {padding:0 5vw; top:22vw;}
   .parallax-wrapper .parallax-1 {
     &::before {
       background-image: url('/assets/images/illustration-02.jpg');
@@ -114,9 +117,7 @@
       background:url('/assets/images/logo-partners-mobile.png') no-repeat 50% 95%; background-size:90vw;
     }
     background-size:90%;
-    .intro-title {
-      padding:0 5vw;
-    }
+    .intro-title {padding:0;}
   }
   @media screen and (max-width: $medium) {
     #fixedTitle {padding:0;}
@@ -127,25 +128,22 @@
 
   }
   @media screen and (min-width: $xlarge) {
-    //#fixedTitle {padding:0 14vw;}
+    #fixedTitle {padding:0 11vw;}
     .subheading-text .intro-title {padding:0 6vw;}
   }
+  @media screen and (min-width: $xxlarge) {
+    #fixedTitle {padding:0 13vw;}
+    .subheading-text .intro-title {padding:0 8vw;}
+  }
 }
 
 
 .layout--about, .layout--how {  
   .subheading-text {
-    @media screen and (min-width: $small) {
-      .descWrapper {
-        columns: auto 2;
-        column-gap: 4vw;
-        text-align:left;
-        margin-top:4vw;
-      }
+    @media screen and (min-width: 850px) {
+      .descWrapper {columns: auto 2; column-gap: 4vw; text-align:left; margin-top:4vw;}
     }
-    @media screen and (max-width: $medium) {
-      p {text-align:left;}
-    } 
+    @media screen and (max-width: $medium) {p {text-align:left;}} 
   }
 }
 

_sass/basically-basic/_sections.scss

@@ -228,6 +228,7 @@
 }
 .contentBlock-light {
   background:$white;
+  h2, h3, h4, h5, p {text-align:left; padding:0;}
   //text-align:center;
 }
 

about.md

@@ -2,9 +2,10 @@
 layout: about
 hero_alt: "Colorful artwork of tropical plants and animals at night"
 image: assets/images/illustration-02-mobile.jpg
-headline: "Built on years of development, backed by an ecosystem of organizations seeking true change."
+headline: "Built on years of development, backed by organizations seeking far‑reaching change."
 subheadline: "Frequency will be a Polkadot parachain built on technology in development since 2019. Seeking to enable a billion people to have more agency over their data, Frequency delivers essential tooling to create a next generation of people-centric social networking apps that offer consumers more control and choice."
 subheadline2: "The project originated with Unfinished, a social impact organization with a network of partners across technology, academia, social impact and the arts. Early work was also funded by Project Liberty, an initiative to support a more equitable architecture for the digital world."
-subheadline3: "The first phase of work focused on delivering the social network as core Internet functionality by developing the Decentralized Social Networking Protocol. DSNP serves as a public resource, completely unlinked to financial incentives. Frequency is the second stage of work, and unlocks decentralized social networking at scale for the first time. Frequency gives builders a revolutionary pricing model designed to support sustainable businesses, and aims to be a common path to put Web3 features in the hands of the everyday Internet user." 
+subheadline3: "The first phase of work focused on delivering the social network as core Internet functionality by developing the Decentralized Social Networking Protocol. DSNP serves as a public resource, completely unlinked to financial incentives." 
+subheadline4: "Frequency is the second stage of work, and unlocks decentralized social networking at scale for the first time. Frequency gives builders a revolutionary pricing model designed to support sustainable businesses, and aims to be a common path to put Web3 features in the hands of the everyday Internet user." 
 
 ---

how.md

@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 ---
 layout: how
-headline: "Frequency makes it possible for builders to embed
-decentralized social at a low, predictable cost."
+headline: "Soon, builders can embed decentralized social at a low, predictable cost."
 subheadline: "When blockchain technology is applied to the high-volume, low-value transactions of social networks—messages, posts, and likes—the cost quickly overwhelms business models. Yet blockchains can unlock an exciting new era of social networking apps that enable people to interact in a public digital space and retain agency over their data. Frequency changes the way blockchain transactions are priced so blockchain technology can be leveraged for social networking at the scale of network effects." 
 
 ---

index.md

@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@ layout: home
 hero_alt: "Colorful artwork of tropical plants and animals during the daytime"
 image: assets/images/illustration-01-mobile.png
 headline: "Together, we can free <br>the social network for<br> a billion people."
-subheadline: "It begins by unlocking a new era of open innovation in social networks. Frequency delivers infrastructure that lower barriers to competition, and will fuel diverse next generation apps that give people more agency, choice, and control in their digital lives." 
+subheadline: "It begins by unlocking a new era of open innovation in social networks. Frequency delivers infrastructure that lowers barriers to competition, fueling diverse next generation apps that give people more agency, choice, and control in their digital lives." 
 
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