minor copy edits to linea safe

docs/build-on-linea/tooling/linea-safe.md

@@ -3,11 +3,19 @@ title: Create a multi-signature smart contract wallet
 description: Use Linea Safe to create a multi-signature smart contract wallet
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-Linea Safe is a multi-signature smart contract wallet, which means it requires a minimum number of signatures to approve a transaction before it can occur. If for example you have 3 main stakeholders in your business, you are able to set up the wallet to require approval from 2 out of 3 (2/3) or all 3 people before the transaction is sent. This assures that no single person could compromise the funds.
+Linea Safe is a multi-signature smart contract wallet.
 
-On top of that, Linea Safe gives complete self custody over funds and the smart contract that is deployed is completely trustless and in control.
+This means it requires a minimum number of signatures to approve a transaction before it can occur.
+If, for example, you have 3 main stakeholders in your business, you could set up the wallet to
+"require approval from 2 out of 3 (2/3)", or all 3 people, before the transaction is sent.
+This assures that no single person could compromise the funds.
+
+On top of that, Linea Safe gives complete self-custody over funds. In other words, the smart
+contract deployed for the wallet has complete control over the wallet's contents, and does not
+rely on any trusted external party for execution.
 
 To create your Linea Safe wallet click [here](https://safe.linea.build).
 
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-to check the status of the linea safe and entry points https://status.safe.linea.build/ not sure if we want to include this. right now it is password protected -->
+to check the status of the linea safe and entry points https://status.safe.linea.build/ not 
+sure if we want to include this. right now it is password protected -->