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@@ -252,7 +252,9 @@ In practice, most people develop shell scripts by running commands at the shell
 to make sure they're doing the right thing,
 then saving them in a file for re-use.
 This style of work allows people to recycle
-what they discover about their data and their workflow with just a few extra keystrokes: One call to `history`, cleaning up the output, save as shell script.
+what they discover about their data and their workflow with one call to `history`
+and a bit of editing to clean up the output
+and save it as a shell script.
 
 #### Nelle's Pipeline: Creating a Script