diff --git a/accepted/2024/net10.md b/accepted/2024/net10.md
index 7cfcf3e19..6f3aca90e 100644
--- a/accepted/2024/net10.md
+++ b/accepted/2024/net10.md
@@ -60,8 +60,8 @@ The reason to fail the build is because in practice someone trying to target
 .NET 10 will most likely fail anyway because the either don't have the .NET
 Framework 3.5 targeting pack -- or worse -- they do, but the code doesn't
 compile because it's meant for modern .NET Core, not a 25 year old .NET
-Framework 1.0. By failing it early it turns an actionable error into something
-that makes more sense to the user.
+Framework 1.0. By failing it early it turns an unintelligible error message into
+something actionable.
 
 The reason to issue the warning is to avoid any ambiguities moving forward.