fix: clean up grammar

charlesbjohnson · Mar 28, 2018 · fe9ec0c · fe9ec0c
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diff --git a/src/includes/experience/contract-1.html b/src/includes/experience/contract-1.html
@@ -30,6 +30,6 @@ <h4>Independent Contract</h4>
         <li>Developed an ETL pipeline for the accounting team of a fast-paced startup to unify transaction and payment data from disparate Shopify instances into a single SAP ERP system.</li>
         <li>Created a comprehensive technical spec within the first week and delivered a v1.0.0 by the following week.</li>
         <li>Delivered the final release ahead of schedule allowing the client to rollout their SAP implementation in half the estimated time.</li>
-        <li>Worked autonomously but transparently and helped establish a foundation of engineering best practices for the client in the process.</li>
+        <li>Worked autonomously, but transparently, and established engineering best practices throughout the process for the client's internal engineering team.</li>
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diff --git a/src/includes/experience/lob.html b/src/includes/experience/lob.html
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ <h4>Lob</h4>
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     <ul>
-        <li>Lead engineer on the Partner Operations Team, responsible for routing and fulfillment to print partners on the backend.</li>
+        <li>Lead engineer on the Partner Operations Team, responsible for integrating routing and fulfillment technology with print partners on the backend.</li>
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             <li>Worked cross-functionally to perform in-depth research in identifying bottlenecks and roadmapping a path towards greater scalability.</li>
             <li>Completely refactored the fulfillment worker codebase, increasing throughput while reducing error rates.</li>

diff --git a/src/includes/experience/walmartlabs.html b/src/includes/experience/walmartlabs.html
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ <h4>@WalmartLabs</h4>
 
         <li>
             Took ownership of Mason, an internal CMS tool for administrating and publishing pages on the Topic Page platform.
-            Revamped the underutilized, 2-year old application to become one of the most widely used internal tools by the Site Merchandising team.
+            Revamped the underutilized, 2-year old application to become one of the most widely used internal tools within the Site Merchandising organization.
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         <li>
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             <li>
                 Took ownership of Mason, an internal CMS tool for administrating and publishing pages on the Topic Page platform.
-                Revamped the underutilized, 2-year old application to become one of the most widely used internal tools by the Site Merchandising team.
+                Revamped the underutilized, 2-year old application to become one of the most widely used internal tools within the Site Merchandising organization.
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